When they opened their eyes, they saw they were on some white fluffy stuff which they discovered were clouds like this:

“Ahhhhh! We’re on clouds! Ahhhhhh!” screamed Luna.

“Calm down, calm down. Anyway, the question is, how did we get here? Last I remember we were choking to death going home in a smoke coming out of a knife I found under a bush because it’s allergic to my blood. Please tell me that didn’t actually happen.” pleaded Layla

“Uh, it didn’t happen.” answered Luna.

“Oh thank you!” she looked around them. “Okay, first thing’s first. How do we get off this thing?”

“Umm, I don’t think that’s going to be a further problem.”

“Why?”

“Well, we’re not, you know, on the cloud. We’re sort of, in it. Like, we’re falling through a thick layer or clouds. And they don’t go on forever. Look.” She pointed below them. Underneath them was a a huge waterfall, crashing down and hitting a large bubbly surface of, also, water.

“Wow. That’s just… wow. It’s so beautiful.” said Layla.

“What! Are you kidding me? I nearly fell off! Get me off of here!” screamed Luna

“Shhh! Look, over there. There are so-” She was promptly cut off when they stopped falling through the clouds, and fell into the water with a loud and smacking SPLASH.

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    7 Responses

  • iworm says...

    Strange things happening to them indeed!!

  • Bessie b says...

    I love it it’s great !!!!

  • Bessie b says...

    There are some strang ideas in there but I absooooolutly looove it pleas do a noter one and if you do I will give you… um…um….um I will give you um… 1£ if you do another one after all of that I hope you will do another one!!!from bessie b

  • Frank says...

    What an incredible imagination!!
    I love your poems and stories!
    from Frank B.

  • you know who wren says...

    great imagination I loved it you are fantastic at inventing things !!!!!!!

  • DadaF says...

    A lot of suspense, a bit of humour, mix it all together and you get Mona’s really good story!!!! Brill!

  • FashionGirl says...

    Now that is what I call good writing.

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