Before, we were a book without a word.
As my magic drew you in,
Your runes put a spell on me.
Now, we are as limitless as the world.
For this, my dear, is my favourite combination:
Your hair; as black as the night sky,
Your eyes; as blue as the sea.
And you, my dear, are the epitome of perfection.
Where we now stand, you stood.
I was lonely, when you found me,
You were lost, when I found you.
We are one, Alec Lightwood.
4 Responses
Sean Groarke says...
Don’t know the characters, but very good writing.
Mona says...
Tihi thank you for all your comments! 🙂
Lola aka Jem's, Clara's, Sansa's wife etc. says...
This is a really good poem ! I feel like you transcripted Magnus’s love very well, that you almost feel it ! Although, it would have been EVEN better if you wrote a longer poem because firstly an ode is supposed to be quite long, and secondly we can never have enough Malec fanpoetry. Plus, the fact that Magnus is immortal was kind of represented and I could very well feel it, but because I know the characters… So if someone doesn’t know them you have to make them understand 😉
So awesome, BEAUTIFUL start but a longer poem would be top-notch !
Love you,
xx
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Mona says...
Thank you for your lovely comment Mrs CarstairsOswaldStark <3 Yes, it's true that an ode is typically longer and at first the poem was longer but I realised I had gone off-track so I separated the poem in half and the other half I will publish probably next week 🙂 it won’t be specifically Malec, it’ll be more generalised 😛 you have a good point though. I should change the title, it would be more logical. I think I’ll simply name it Malec. Thanks so much for your feedback!! 😀 Ily <3
Momo