You are brighter than all moons,
Your clothes as black as the runes
Decorating your skin – clear as the pale night.
I am able to find my way, guided by your witchlight.
Oh the people you’ve saved, the things you’ve destroyed.
You saved me from myself and filled up the void
Growing in my empty heart. By the angel,
I owe you my life, son of Raziel.
Your touch makes the power of your stele dim.
I am yours as you are mine, dear Nephilim.
2 Responses
Lola aka Jem's, Sansa's, Clara's wife etc. says...
I love this part even more ! The rhymes are perfect and rich, while the language isn’t complicated because here it’s Magnus speaking, so he knows what he feels and what he wants ! You wrote that very well !
Please do a poem like this but from Alec’s point of view !
And you should consider writing fanfiction. Really.
xx
Lola
Mona says...
Thank you Lola! <3 I was thinking about writing one from Alec's point of view, but I don't know if I will. I don't usually choose a topic and then write about, I mostly let the poem come to me before realising what it's about 😛
Remember that fanfiction we were all going to write in quatrième about the Hunger Games where we were all going to write about a different character? Well I wrote one page of that from Finnick's point of view, which is the most fanfiction I've ever written xD I think the reason I don't write fanfiction is because I don't like reading, and the reason for that is that I feel like it's not the same story, more like a spin-off 🙂
Mona
xoxo